American president George Bush has announced that the U.S government will take interests in the bank institutions. The american government wants to help the financial sector, by pumping in 250 billion dollar. With the 250 billion dollar the american autohorities will take interests in Citigroup, Goldman Sachs, Wells Fargo, JPMorgan, Bank of America, Merrill Lynch, Morgan Stanley, State Street en Bank of New York Mellon Corp. The purchase of shares and interests in bank institutions would be short term measures to stabalise the markets.
Alexander Rombaut
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American president George Bush has announced that the U.S government will take interests in the [which ones?] bank institutions. The american [capital letter: 'American' !!] government wants to help the financial sector, [drop comma] by pumping in 250 billion dollar [dollars]. With the [linking +/-] 250 billion dollar [dollars] the american [capital letter !!] autohorities [spelling: 'authorities'] will take interests in Citigroup, Goldman Sachs, Wells Fargo, JPMorgan, Bank of America, Merrill Lynch, Morgan Stanley, State Street en [and] Bank of New York Mellon Corp. The purchase of shares and interests in bank institutions would be short[-]term measures to stabalise [spelling: stabilise'] the markets.
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