During the last weeks, the amounts of cash in circulation in the euro zone increased dramatically. This is a result of both the financial crises, which has reached a peak in the last weeks and the lack of confidence in the financial health of markets and banks. Despite the fact that this situation is for some people and companies a real catastrophe, it is also inspiring others to rob and steal the property of others. Luckily governments are not only involved in saving financial organizations, trying to restore trust and confidence but they are also obliged to protect private property in a more severe way.
Elias Van Bever
source : http://www.tijd.be/nieuws/economie-financien/Gezinnen_potten_geld_op.8089328-600.art
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During the last weeks, the amounts of cash in circulation in the euro zone increased [tenses: 'have increased' i.p.v. 'increased'] dramatically. This is a result of both the financial crises ['crisis', plural form: 'crises'], which has reached a peak in the last weeks [comma] and the lack of confidence in the financial health of markets and banks. Despite the fact that [strange linking expression; it is like the second part of this sentence will be positive] this situation is for some people and companies a real catastrophe (sentence structure not OK, 'a real catastrophe' comes first and then 'for some...'], it is also inspiring others to rob and steal the property of others. Luckily governments are not only involved in saving financial organizations, trying to restore trust and confidence [comma] but they are also obliged to protect private property in a more severe way.
Flow +/- because of wrong sentence structure and strange linking expression.
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