Study shows that retired people often save nothing, someone who lives alone doesn’t have the intention to save a lot and families are the best savers. In fact, 80 percent of the Flemish families invest or save money. A savings account is still very popular and investment banking becomes also popular. The Flemish families invest next to real estate most in investment funds such as bevek.
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Source: http://www.nieuwsblad.be/GT/Index.aspx?genericId=293&articleId=OB1HF490
Wouter Van Damme
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Study [vague reference] shows that retired people often save nothing, someone who lives alone doesn’t have the intention to save a lot and families are the best savers. In fact, 80 percent of the Flemish families invest or save money. A savings account is still very popular and investment banking becomes also [has also become] popular. The [drop 'The'] Flemish families invest next to real estate most in investment funds such as bevek [flow of this sentence not OK].
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