Stock markets all over the world have closed significantly higher today, after European governments decided to inject more money into the financial system. As a result, investors’ confidence all over the world rose sharply, resulting in global rise of share prices.The money promised by the governments in the euro zone will be used to guarantee the lending between banks. This interbank lending is very important to revive the financial markets, that have been disturbed by the recent crisis.
Vincent Nykjaer
(BBC)
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Stock markets all over the world have closed [tenses: 'closed' i.p.v. 'have closed'] significantly higher today [when exactly?], after European governments decided to inject more money into the financial system. As a result, investors’ confidence all over the world rose sharply, resulting in [a] global rise of ['in' i.p.v. 'of'] share prices.The money promised by the governments in the euro zone will be used to guarantee the lending between banks. This interbank lending is very important to revive the financial markets, that ['which' i.p.v. 'that'] have been disturbed by the recent crisis.
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