Iceland and its people are under massive pressure to find a healing approach for the effects that the crisis is bringing along. Because of the bank and money unit crash, Icelandic stores need to break into their stock to keep the racks full. Importers now demand payment in advance out of precaution, wich Icelandic entrepreneurs can't afford due to the low value of the Icelandic Krona. Clothes and basic products will become rare in Iceland within two weeks if the crisis keeps up at this pace and nothing is done about it!
Lore Pieters
Source : http://www.hln.be/hln/nl/2401/Crisis-op-de-beurs/article/detail/450648/2008/10/14/IJslanders-gedoemd-tot-hamsteren-door-bijna-lege-rekken.dhtml
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Iceland and its people are under massive pressure to find a healing approach for ['to' i.p.v. 'for'] the effects that the crisis [be more specific: which crisis?] is bringing along. Because of the bank and money unit crash, Icelandic stores need to break into their stock to keep the racks full. Importers now demand payment in advance out of precaution, wich [spelling: 'which' !!] Icelandic entrepreneurs can't afford due to the low value of the Icelandic Krona. Clothes and basic products will become rare in Iceland within two weeks if the crisis keeps up at this pace and nothing is done about it!
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