vrijdag 24 oktober 2008

Jean-Luc Dehaene must restore confidence


Because of a sharp drop in the share price, Dexia announced a new chairman for the Board of Directors. Paribas Pierre Mariani, manager of BNP, was put forward by France and he is going to be the new CEO. The function of Chairman of the Board of Directors will be filled by ex-Prime Minister Jean-Luc Dehaene, who was put forward by Yves Leterme because of his financial and political knowledge. Jean-Luc Dehaene en Mariani recreate big future opportunities for Dexia, by giving a strong signal of confidence for the market .


Carmen Ringoot

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Because of a sharp drop in the share price, Dexia announced a new chairman for the Board of Directors. Paribas Pierre Mariani, manager of BNP, was put forward by France and he is going to be the new CEO. The function of Chairman of the Board of Directors will be filled by ex-Prime Minister Jean-Luc Dehaene, who was put forward by Yves Leterme because of his financial and political knowledge. Jean-Luc Dehaene en Mariani recreate [strange wording] big future opportunities for Dexia, [drop comma] by giving a strong signal of confidence for [to i.p.v. for] the market .

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