The card companies are taking advantage of the financial crisis to raise the interests of the credit cards, used by the customers. The customers need to pay a much higher interest when they use their credit card for withdrawing cash or to pay their mortgages, than a couple of years ago. The card companies are making profit of 161million pounds, thanks to the huge interests that they charge the people. That is why Uswitch accuses the card companies and says that the high interest rates should be investigated, in order to protect the customers and their money.Troch Mikio
Source: http://www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/money/borrowing/article4941884.ece
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The ['Credit' i.p.v. 'The'] card companies are taking advantage of the financial crisis to raise the interests of the credit cards [credit card interests], used by the customers [drop text after comma]. The [drop 'the'] customers need to pay a much higher interest when they use their credit card for withdrawing cash or to pay their mortgages [with credit card?], [drop comma] than a couple of years ago. The card companies are making profit of 161million [161m] pounds, thanks to the huge interests that they charge the people [drop 'the people']. That is why Uswitch [?] accuses the card companies and says that the high interest rates should be investigated, in order to protect the customers and their money.
Flow +/- because you sometimes use superfluous words. Also make sure that references are clear.
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