
Presidential candidates have to pay a lot of money for their campaign.
In april, Clinton already had a debt of $10,3 million. Maybe that could be the reason why this feminine candidate left the presidential elections?
One thing is sure: Obama hold on, in contradiction to his ex-oppositional candidate he's far from being in the red.
Astrid Van Acker (group 7)
(link: http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2008/04/21/politics/main4029754.shtml)
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Presidential candidates [where? which country?] have to pay a lot of money for their campaign.
In april [names of months: capital letter !!], Clinton already had a debt of $10,3 million. Maybe that could be the reason why this feminine candidate left the presidential elections?
One thing is sure: Obama hold [holds !!] on, [;] in contradiction to his ex-oppositional candidate he's far from being in the red.
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