dinsdag 14 oktober 2008

Fortis celebrating a crisis

Fortis Insurance Belgium considered this time of the year appropriate to hold an exclusive party in Monaco.
Last week Fortis threw a little party that was meant for their 50 best delegates who were granted not only a sleeping place in an extremely expensive hotel, but also a dinner in one of the most prestigious restaurants of the world. The price tag of this all, plane tickets included, was about €150,000. Of course it won’t be a complete surprise that this party caused a lot of indignant reactions of astonished people, considering the monetary crisis we’re dealing with at the moment.

The prestigious restaurant Louis XV in Monaco
Maxine Truyens

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Fortis Insurance Belgium considered this time of the year appropriate to hold an exclusive party in Monaco.
Last week Fortis threw a little party that was meant for their 50 best delegates who were granted not only a sleeping place in an extremely expensive hotel, but also a dinner in one of the most prestigious restaurants of the world [in the world]. The price tag of this all, plane tickets included, was about €150,000. Of course it won’t be a complete surprise that this party caused a lot of indignant reactions of [by] astonished people, considering the monetary crisis we’re dealing with at the moment.

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