The American government is doing everything what it takes to ensure the viability of America's banking system. The government created a plan to end the credit crisis. Just as in Europe it agreed to combine a partial nationalization with a package of loan guarantees. The reason is simple: by taking over the free market for a short period, the American government ensures its people a good-working long-term economic future.
Wouter Staelens
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The American government is doing everything what [drop 'what'] it takes to ensure the viability of America's banking system. The government created a plan to end the credit crisis. Just as in Europe it agreed to combine a partial nationalization with a package of loan guarantees. The reason is simple: by taking over the free market for a short period, the American government ensures its people a good-working ['well-functioning' i.p.v. 'good-working']] long-term economic future.
Good topic sentence and good flow.
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