Recovering from yesterday's 800 point drop, The Dow Jones industrial average jumped 600 points today after governments announced additional support for the global banking system. Analysts say the index received so many negatives last week, it was to be predicted that a governmental intervention would have a positive effect on the index. When the Bank of England, the European Central Bank and the Swiss National Bank released that they would be working together to provide the necessairy short-term funding to get lending on the level it once was, the Dow Jones made its largest one-session gain ever. Nevertheless, the whole economical situation remains extremely unstable and chances are that the Dow Jones might loose its today's gain again very soon.
Michaël Vandendriessche
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Recovering from yesterday's 800 point drop, The [no capital letter after comma] Dow Jones industrial average jumped 600 points today after governments announced additional support for the global banking system. Analysts say the index received so many negatives last week, it was to be predicted that a governmental intervention would have a positive effect on the index. When the Bank of England, the European Central Bank and the Swiss National Bank released that they would be working together to provide the necessairy [spelling] short-term funding to get lending on the level it once was, the Dow Jones made its largest one-session gain ever. Nevertheless, the whole economical [economic !!] situation remains extremely unstable and chances are that the Dow Jones might loose [lose !!] its [drop 'its'] today's gain again very soon.
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