The whole financial crisis makes people lose their confidence in bank savings; it’s not just grandpa any more with money underneath the bed…More and more people decide to keep their money ‘save at home’, that’s why the demand for cash money has increased enormously in the Euro-zone last week.
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The whole financial crisis makes people lose their [drop 'their'] confidence in bank savings [in savings accounts]; it’s not just grandpa any more with money underneath the bed…
More and more people decide to keep their money ‘save [spelling: safe !!] at home’, that ['which' i.p.v. 'that']’s why the demand for cash money has increased [tenses: 'last week' SO use simple past 'increased' !!] enormously in the Euro-zone last week. The danger exists that burglars get aware of the distrust in our bank system and the police warns ['police' is a plural noun SO 'warn' i.p.v. 'warns'] for ['of' i.p.v. 'for'] an equal increase of ['in' i.p.v. 'of'] the number of home robberies. But considering the stabilizing [?] share market and the intervention of the government ['government intervention']; aren’t we all reacting too excessively ['aren't we exaggerating']?
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