Gordon Brown’s rescue plan is becoming the example of how to react on the financial crisis that is expanding these days. The first major aspect of the British Prime Minster’s plan is to pump an enormous amount of liquidities into the system. Another element is to give securities to the banks to stimulate them to exchange money to each other again. Many of Brown’s ideas will be found in other European leaders’ rescue plans that will be released soon.
Andreas Standaert
Source: http://www.telegraph.co.uk/finance/financetopics/financialcrisis/3190687/Gordon-Browns-plan-is-model-for-EU-response-to-financial-crisis.html
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Gordon Brown’s rescue plan is becoming the example of how to react on ['to' i.p.v. 'on'] the financial crisis that is expanding these days. The first major aspect of the British Prime Minster’s plan is to pump an enormous amount of liquidities into the system. Another element is to give securities to the banks to stimulate them to exchange money to each other [drop 'to each other'] again. Many of Brown’s ideas will be found in other European leaders’ rescue plans that will be released soon.
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